Is this a good writing piece for self-harm?

I'm crying. Maybe I'm upset because the piece is so emotionally close to me, but I think part of it is because of the way it's written. I love how the piece builds and builds, and how it comes around in a circle back to where it started, focusing on control. 'Cause control's what it's really all about, right? Control. Distraction. Close enough. I love this.